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目の見えない少年と魚の話

非龍

感想

なんとなく童話みたいな雰囲気があるなぁ、と思いました。
話・絵ともに素晴らしいと思いますが、
惜しむらくは句読点が少なかったり、誤変換が多くて読みづらかったです＾＾；
作品自体とてもいいものなので、気が向いたら直してほしいなと思います。

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No.21904 - 2014-12-30 06:38:00
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